My Swimming
I hopped in the pool as if I was dead and then the starter yelled, "Get ready" .... "GO!" I pushed off the wall with all my power. My arms were windmills and I kicked for my life.
Soon I got to the wall and I tumble turned. I shot through the water making bubbles. I kept kicking and swinging my arms.
When I touched the finish line, I stopped to see if anyone had bet me. But no, I was first. Charlie was 2nd, Ben B was 3rd. Wow I did it!
Fantastic writing Angus. It is so descriptive, I can just imagine it. You should be proud of this writing.
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