Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Monique's Descriptive Writing

Sweet and Sour
I climb in and yell out GO! We take off and it feels like I'm in a horror movie, then it's like lollies and fizzy. The water sprays my eyes, I can't see for a couple of seconds. Then I hear a scream and my friend is off. They go slower, and slower and slower. The waves get bigger, and bigger and bigger. I get tipped off and I don't see a thing. I come up, a wave crashes over me. We get back on and they take us home.

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