Monday, 11 March 2013

Darcy's Descriptive Writing

Help! Water splashed in my face. I was cold and then whoosh I let go! I thought I was going to drown but I remembered I was wearing a lifejacket. Pop, I fell into the water. I floated, Yay!

3 comments:

  1. darcy i like the way that you said 'i was cold and hen whoosh i let go

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  2. great description hopefully i can get some writing on here too !!!

    madaleine**)

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