Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Niveek's Descriptive Writing

Whoosh, splash, smash! It's like he is the quickest of them all. It is the most extraordinary ride. It is as fast as a cheetah. It's like he is going to slip, like he's going to fall, but no. It's amazing, it's so fabulous. The water is the most beautiful water you can think of.

2 comments:

  1. Thats what you call a descriptive writing...
    siva

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