Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Charlie's Descriptive Writing

The biscuit is as bumpy as rocks. I wish I could go on the biscuit. The biscuit looks as blue as the sky. The biscuit looks as big as a raft. It looks great fun, but I've never been on it, instead I went on this roller coaster called the sea viper. It was great, it had loops and everything. While I was on it I was still wondering what the biscuit would look like. I wonder why it was a blow up?


  1. I remember the sea viper, it made my tummy sick!
    Nice to see so many peoples' writing
    From Jo Gilbert

  2. im scared and I haven't even heard of it !!!!!