Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Trish's Descriptive Writing

I'm on a biscuit, not a real one just a water kind, but it is really scary but fun. I have butterflies in my tummy. It is wet like I'm having a bath. The water is cold, a bit too cold. There was a few on the lake. I was jumping really high, it was done. I started to run for joy, the biscuit ride was so fun and wicked. The biscuit was purple, it was round and it was hard to grip on.

1 comment:

  1. i wish water in lakes were warm too if that happened i would be soaking everyday.....madaleine