Tuesday 12 March 2013

Mekeisha's Descriptive Writing

Yes we are going down to the lake. We climb onto the biscuit, suddenly there is a jult as the biscuit rips away with out us. I screamed, "Stop".  They whipped the boat around, they thought that we were on the biscuit but we weren't.

2 comments:

  1. I like your descriptive writing Mekeisha it is very funny

    BY TANNAH

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  2. where are they now...mystery????? by madaleine!

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