Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Ty's Descriptive Writing

It was as intense as bungy jumping, with the water going into my eyes. People bumping into me but I get them back. I was racing through the water. I skim across the water like a stone. I suddenly finish but I still want to go again. I felt fearless but scared.

1 comment:

  1. ty i like the way you've used descriptive language in yours.siva